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Thursday, 27 September 2018

T3w10 writing

this week I have been practicing using capital letters and full stops. I have made a book using google slides write and illustrate my story. please have a look and leave a comments 

4 comments:

  1. Hi Phoenix! Well done on a great first story book posted on your blog! I like the bright colours you have used, it really caught my attention on the page. I like the interesting information you have included about T-Rex dinosaurs too. Next time make sure that you have the illustrations away from the writing so people can read everything you have written.

    From Miss W

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  2. hi phoenix you did great job ..)

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  3. good job on the dancr

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  4. wow phoenix i love all of the strong words that you i wood like to know how big is the T-reks.

    form lucas

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